(Archive) The Song of Indilzar
From the archives of the Gondorian
OK, this Lay is hanging out in other logs, but briefly it is a poem I made up about a TP that occurred in the late 90s. A rather amateurish piece I might say, but here it is unaltered.
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Weather: Rainy
Time: Early Evening
Season: Summer
Date: Sterday - July 5, 3021
Real Time: Sun Oct 08 17:47:24 2000
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*Note - log supplied by Drenlyn*
Dol Amroth: Prince\'s Castle - Grand Hall of the Stars
If the eyes of Men are drawn to the heavens, then let them look here into the breathtaking heights and be never dismayed the great dome of the Grand Hall rises far above the earth in all its splendor. Galleries ring the rotunda at every level, and the majesty that is the birthright of Numenor\'s descendants has its heart here, in the vastness of this circular, soaring chamber. It is not so much a hall as it is the nave of a cathedral.
The skylight-windows at the dome\'s distant apex allow the natural light of the day into the hall, yet the marble stonework and polished lebethron of this place retain a chill, untouchable dignity. Grand archways lead east, to the Hall of Armor, and west, ultimately to the throne room, but a man stood at the one side would need shout for his opposite to hear him. A carpeted stair leads upward, and to the galleries that ring the open space high above.
Contents:
Maernus
Aglaring
Thregomir
Indilzar
Obvious exits:
Carpeted Stairs , Lebethron Door
\"Forgive me m\'lord.\" Speaks Aglaring in a somber tone. Slowly taking the seat across from Indilzar, upon the bench identical to the other. Though again he nods, slightly slower then the ones before hand, as the knight speaks of lore and arts, something not entirely unfamiliar in Aglaring\'s life.
Indilzar touches the mandolin again as a soft note sounds throughout the hall, \"This was written by Sirion the Younger, and it is of the Quest of the Blue Lord. Or Hirluin, the Lord of Pinath Gelin, who was captured by the Haradrim some years ago. Yet now Sirion is dead, but many here yet honour his songs which were renowned in his days, for he was a mighty singer among Men.\"
Indilzar then lifts his voice up into song....
Of the Capture of Hirluin the Fair
The purple banners in breeze flew
Over white towers manned by few
In lonely Pelargir by the sea,
Now held under deadly siege.
By foes of the west dire and black
And greatly was their wont to sack
that mighty city on river quay,
Pelargir mighty might have fallen that day,
t\'were it not for the deeds of some,
Who at Angbor\'s behest did come:
Angiest proud, Hurin dauntless,
Sirion Marshall with blue crest.
Yet chief of these that held the day
was Hirluin the Fair as sunlit ray
might be to those manly handful,
who saw hope in the Fair until,
Darkness came on watery wings
and the steel glittering meshed with rings
\'gainst iron sword of Umbar making
came to Pelargir in hopes creating
chaos of their enemies in the North
seeking that they may come not forth
\'gain to open war and Gondor\'s
folk sold enslaved who not would swore
to the Shadow of whom they did serve,
in worship hateful and with ferve.
In the melee dire by the quay,
Came Hirluin to that doomed fray,
where the blood ran thick as the smoke
of Orodruin, whose clouds choke
Mount Doom: the hopes of the West
will fall yet and though the Fair be best.
Thregomir has reconnected.
Yet he be on those white walls bound
by countless cruel hands which sound
proud beastly horns for all to hear
Hirluin was caught, and all felt fear
that doom was nigh as the banners of Fire,
came foreboding fate most Dire.
To be taken to the burning south,
Far away from Anduin\'s mouth
to Umbar town of Corsair home,
far away from the rich loam
of Pinath Gelin of which from
Hirluin\'s the Fair\'s might did come.
Yet in torment did he languish
in dungeons deep not to finish
his moveless fate in fair Gondor,
among green Gelin\'s trees hoar.
Of the Council of Imrahil and the Number of the Company
Yet still o\'er Pelargir flag flies
Of Tree amid the sunlit skies.
Yet that tale is in other lore told,
Of the deeds of great Gondor bold
And cast back the Mordor yoke,
that sought to trample and choke
that fair land nigh the Anduin
And battle that there in grim din
Claiming many brave lives ere all
was to tell. Such was the fall
of Mordor\'s dark and dreary host
When they fell few and manly most.
Yet now know in those after days,
When the sunlit and moonlit rays,
Returned to merry Anduin,
Came the news in the joyful din
of poor hapless Hirluin\'s fate.
Caught in a snare of the black hate
of Umbar town in shackles beheld
no longer to roam on the fair field
no more. Now that prince that noble
blood, no taint or stain or sable
thought be in that fair frame. Call
Council in fair Belfalas of fall
of Hirluin in Pelargir
to contrive rescue without fear
of that dauntless man. Such plan
was wrought in the Swan Knightly Clan
to go by stealth and secret skill
in disguise, but not bound to kill
rather to rescue by stealthy
wit, Hirluin the man mighty.
Such now we number those of the quest.
Selected by Imrahil was his best
for in that Prince was no nobler man
thought where the true blood elven
still courses through the strong veins
in fair Dol Amroth. Where none fains
battle and honor or quest perilous
seeking that which is most glorious
to defend that noble blood and Tree
in that land nigh mouths of the Sea.
Leader of this quest was of Kin
known as Lord Sema Isilrim
Sirion by name, of hand shorn
whilst wandering in lands forlorn.
His title was Marshall of Thanes
of the Noble Swans of many names.
Yea a Girthilin was too to go,
Amarthion the fierce, the foe
of all who brood in dark light
He who sought relief from night
of his Lord of Old, Thorondor
a mighty man, thane of Gondor.
Next in name was Hirluin\'s kin,
Erindil valiant lord, Pinnath Gelin
was his home. Young and valiant,
the fullness of manhood and salient,
For love\'s sake travel did go he
So that his uncle may be free.
Next in number was Ravenwyr,
No friend to foe, no stranger to fear.
Yet by fickle fate: a strange hand,
picked him to join this noble band.
Sent by Hurin, Ward of the Keys,
he went to Amroth by the Sea.
Away in the east from Ithilien,
came Celebhir the Grey, valiant of men,
knowledgeble in the hunt and chase,
they are like none other race
An almost Elf-folk in the forest,
is Celebhir Silverfoot at the test.
And then was Khanor of the elite,
Trained not for war but for effete
learning and skills, southern ways,
of their evils along their quays,
Sent was he by Hurin too,
On mission known by rare few.
Two Knights too were on this quest,
Of the Thanes, swift, the best
and hand picked for peril in the waste,
For the journey was sure with haste
Landros of Linhir was the first,
Findraff Fell-hand who foes had cursed.
Of the Camfaroth and the Sea Journey
The ship was set, the waters blue,
The men of heart, all were true
Who sailed on that sure ship to the south,
Far away from Anduin\'s mouth
Would \'The Hand that Pursues\' speed,
Away from mirth, away from mead,
of fair northlands beneath the sun,
Camfaroth was disguised as one
of the merchant ships that sailed
alone in those watery ways never failed
its mission. In storm or shadow
never sunk never hindered in row
brought them across those wide bare bays
Away from magic, away from fays
to the mortalest mortal realm
in the world. Where black is the helm,
and crooked the swords, of dark Umbar,
Where death is quick and never far.
Came they then disguised in garment,
Of merchants of the firmament.
Outcasts of Gondor were they to be,
unjustly cast to their lot in the sea.
Of Umbar and Namir
And so on a soft silken day
when the washing waves lapped the quay
of Umbar, Camfaroth swift came
As one to look as if the same
A merchant folk with fine, fair goods
From afar, from nether wild woods.
And as they shewed those wares away
softly searching for a secret way
to the Fire Tower where resides,
Hirluin in languish. There hides
torment and despair. Man on man
what willful and worse a sin can
be contrived? Yet even ere search
could be sent. And to elm, and birch
could they return.
Namir came, Lord
was he tall and grim and untoward
to those of mighty Northern race
those who with Dunland besieged that place
not long reckoning of the Southrons
was that. Even sinister Sauron\'s
land was not so much as hated
as was Gondor, in Umbar fated
to be bitter foes till the last day.
So quoth Namir to Sirion:
\"Ho there One-Hand! Where be ye from?
Light is thine skin and eyes are fair
as if from the Norlands who would dare
face us in war. Speak now be sure,
and tell us all thou know and more.\"
And Sirion with a contrived smile,
forced a swift and full denial,
\"From Norlands we come that is certain
but we are outcasts among those men
forever victims of injustice that be
forced now to sail on the silent sea.\"
Namir then smiled and said he,
\"Bravely thou art to sail the sea.
What are thy names? To one and all.
Eight I see here perhaps too tall
to be sons of traders from afar,
or even outcasts of Gondor.
Sirion then said in voice lilting,
\"I am Vorn captain of sailing
ship. Outcast I am with Eran
and Amar from Pelargir\'s clan
This is Ravenwyr my first mate
who sudden chance has brought by fate
to Umbar before. Here is Makhar
merchant of fine goods from afar
and Luken the Simple sturdy boy
who is with the women never coy.
And here is Lanny and Finny,
From the north in forgotten city
are they, now turned to the soft sea
to forget woes to he and he.\"
And Lord Namir laughed long and long:
\"Tell me oh captain by all the song
of Numenor what do you bring?
Perhaps bright and magical rings?
Or slaves from the north lost in war
Come now by fate to poor Umbar
where they will weep forever
to see the cold lands again never.\"
And Sirion spoke in plain voice grim:
\"Cloth from north of Rohirrim
bring we, to sell to thine proud folk,
and those that lay under thy yoke.
The darkling skinned Haradrim.
They are said to be even more grim,
than my mate here if that may be,
even that I can scarcely believe.\"
To which Lord Namir replied,
\"Fine and fine but first simple tithe
of thine cargo will be to me
given so thee from raiders that be
lurking in the shadows free.
and sell thy wares and not cower
may\'st come even to mine tower
and see their all of mine power
perhaps some cloth then may need I
to wear on such beach by and by.\"
To this Sirion swiftly agreed
and soon enough they were freed
to wander that black-hearted town
where ne\'er a person is without frown
in misery abject. This indeed
they could see. An evil, the seed
of Sauron\'s lies long ago
ere the world was bent or laid low
Numenor.
Yet even in these thoughts,
There at quays end stood man who wrought
Sorrow unto Umbar. He was tall
and perfect of face. Once at his call
was men mighty, they were clad in green
and their swords of steel were a-sheen.
Such was Pinnath Gelin\'s prince
yet languishing in Umbar since
the sorrowful Siege of Pelargir.
Now those of Camfaroth saw him here
Hirluin the fair, of lordship shorn,
shackled with chains and forlorn
watching the distant sun sorrowed
waning in the west. Now furrowed
his brow as he sat by the shore
Unknown to him who from the core
of Gondor\'s finest men came
in disguise wearing foreign name.
Yet now the party knew new hope
for he lived in a state few may cope
such as a caged bird in confines
narrow. Yet he lived and such times
may come to free him yet
though he be enmeshed in the net
of Namir the Cruel. Now plans were laid
for rescue and daring but fate had made
other plans for Prince Hirluin
Lord mighty of Pinnath Gelin.
Of the Freedom of Hirluin
In Umbar in the days of dawn
when Numenor yet was sworn
to goodness and wholesome air,
and Meneltarma yet was fair.
The city was wholesome and free.
Yet now black fills the sea
and the maidens weep
as the black land sweeps
about the world in a din of evil.
Yet even in these later days until
the ending of time strange deeds
may be done by foes who heed
the strength of Glorious Gondor.
For what more than fear for
Hirluin\'s kingdom could have mended fate
from Namir, cruel lord, in that town of hate.
Who secretly knew that party by sights
as none other than the dauntless knights
of Dol Amroth. Quaked he in cringing fear
at the sight, and also he shed a tear
knowing what hurt and vengeance may be done
to his people in that lost land neath the sun.
So it was Sirion came to the tower
of Flame. And saw there the frail power
of Namir\'s hand. A darkling deal was struck
not by gallant deed but by the luck
cast by the die of fate. Greed and gold
it was that unyieldy sword. Not bold
or gallant deeds of doughty mighty men.
Through fearful forest thick or ancient fen.
A price was set on Hirluin\'s head,
that he be taken for treasure and lead
away from dark and dusky Umbar town
to return to his regal, royal crown.
So fickle Umbar would sell a man
for the gold rather than quake in their land
of fear of the might of Gondor aroused
not to be dimmed in dark unlight, not doused
but full aflame in eager ardor,
to be squashed and ended but never.
(To this Ravenwyr gave wisely counsel,
\"It would be better than a bitter loss
to pay this petty tithe and away toss
blandful and useless daring deeds
that may end us all once and forever,
give then that courage and not sever
our chance to escape in full glory
to have Hirluin is our victory.)
So the deal was struck and the exchange made
Greedful gold for man met, and plan was laid
to leave that dark city Umbar swiftly,
yet bitter betrayal is more oftenly
occur there than honored loyalty
and the trust and fragile fealty
was snapped like sticks. The folk of Umbar
roused were they as if in a December
storm. Blackful, baleful and thick they came
and soon the party of merchant hame
were chased in the sea by wicked corsairs,
come now quick from their evil lurking lairs.
Of the Destruction of the Camfaroth and the Overland Escape
Ah the sunny sea, the sound that saves,
the sound to which the soul calmly claves,
the sound that calls one to the shored shells,
resounding clear as many fair bells.
Now the party with the Fair in tow
sought to escape swiftly without row
from Umbar city by the swift sea,
yet this escape was not fated to be.
For the corsairs came as a black storm
to catch to kill sound they the harsh horns
of the kill, of the hunt of dark death.
And so unto the reefs they droveth
the Hand that Pursues fell into the deep
never to sail again until the sleep
upon kings ends to scour Arda of foe
forever from fairy to east unto
the singing is done of the last song.
To those quiet shores, those long and long
beaches of sand, dry and hot were they
high was the sun upon that doomed day,
when they emerged as wizened wet rats
yet all still lived though not quite as fat
perhaps as those few mighty might be
had they stayed by Amroth nigh the sea.
Stranded in desert they were in gloom
as if trapped within a dusty tomb.
Truly t\'were it not for Celebhir,
Ranger excell, and dark Ravenwyr,
who in tongue enlisted the desert folk
to their side. Who would shake the hated yoke
of their urbane, fell and cruel masters.
So thence they did give heed and mustered
strength enough to show Celebhir the path
that crossed the desert as a bloody swath.
And though the lonely leagues be long and long
and the hopeless hunt be hot, not in song
or merry mirth would they ever be
until they reached Anduin nigh the sea.
In days ere man yet walked proudly the mould
and elven kinlings were young and bold,
a fierce monster, a rare race, a black breed,
that still lingers as if a soulless seed,
of strange beasts baleful in the wild waste.
Yet even in the party\'s swift haste,
they came upon one of these creatures wild
Roaming the desert as a child
forlorn. Mighty Mumakil it is called,
and indeed it was mammoth and tall.
Its tusks were sharp and ivory white,
it shoulders were three mighty men of height
and its mouth dripped in blushing fierce foam
seeking the death of those from the loam.
Lo! The great deed that day was done aright
Erindil Telpekhor, Prince of Might
faced down that monstrous baleful beast
not would any Gondor-man be a feast
for its mouth. But rather be a carpet
on which to trample. It was parapet
when the sword of Erindil in dismay
swept clean that fated, that doomed day
and down came he with bitter sharp stroke,
the party and all that folk laid it waste,
but Erindil was the chief one of hate
of that dire creature. Tossed as a bale
of new sown hay. That hardy and hale
warrior\'s strength did eb as his blood
seeped from his body like a flash flood.
Hear! Yet t\'were it not so to avail
for the beast\'s own heart did falter and fail.
And so with renewed, resown, heartfelt hope
they left, not to be mirthless and mope
by those washed, withered, and wasted ways
and at last they found the sure, swift, true path
with Erindil bearing a proudly swath
of Mumakil scars. At length the Last
bridge they came to the final task
and in open arms gladly met Anduin.
Ah Anduin, Anduin what be thy ways?
Ye who have been since the dawn of days.
What secrets ye keep, what desires ye hold,
of poor peasantry and mighty man bold?
So they crossed with caution and kissed the white
ground gladly of that righteous realm of might,
Gondor. Gondor land of the stern stone.
Gondor, whose swinging swords were hone
as sharp bitter knives, as tough as bone
Is that mighty land of Tree and Stone.
Listen! And there in fair feast at long last
was the party commended for their task
and upraised were they with honor rare
for to them went the medal of Murazor
and to Ravenwyr honor from afar
for to him went promotion \'mongst other things
and love of Lynnthia the fair maid
who then gladly blissful plans were laid
Of their long and lawful love to each other.
And Erindil, ah Erindil the valiant,
from that hardy hale house most salient
Telpekhor. To thee calls the knighthood
yet to Celebhir, promised brotherhood
of Sirion to he and to Ravenwyr
and all else who now gathered here to hear.
And the people sang in honor and praise
to their valiant deeds gallant. Upraised
were they in that fair land by the sea,
awaiting a new quest and to be free
to show honor and love to proud Gondor,
always uphold these few from afar.
Epilogue
Gondor, Gondor nigh the sea,
what proud land art thee!
Bastion of strength, herald grim,
thee that fights to the last din.
For freedom from foes of the west,
to challenge to honor to show the best
of the western world. Come now and hear
the sea? What paths will bring thee
to such gladness and goodness and happy days
to see the king return and with it praise
of the Folk who fought until the last,
the proud folk who took the task.
Of Gondor, weep ye not for here
are heroes. Shed not a lament or tear.
--Fini-
Indilzar ends his song and looks up at the squire shifting the mandolin back under his cloak, \"Was the moral decision of Sirion the correct one for a swan-knight?\"